Living, Writing + Posting

This is a writing I do not remember about but I guess it has something to do with coming up to Christmas and making up a story.

The original writing with a mistake or start at the top - 2000

"Monday 11th December [2000]


One freezing morning there was a girl named Donna, age 6. It was going to be Christmas. he next day Donna could not wait till that day came. When it was night she was excited.


Donna's Mom told her "to get to bed", so Donna went.


She heard bells, then she heard something drop on the roof. So she went downstairs, she saw Santa Claus.
What are you doing?, she said.
"I'm hear because you've been a good girl", Santa said.
Since you have been a very good girl, you get to ride with me to deliver presents".
"OK', Donna said.


So they both went in the carriage
"Go reindeer's", Santa shouted.


So they delivered every present. 
They went back to the house.
"Thank You little girl", Santa said cheerfully, "I'm going back to Lapland".
"Bye Santa, thanks", Dona said.


So, Donna went back to bed.
The next morning was Christmas, Donna was so exited.
Donna ran downstairs to see what Santa brought her. She saw 10 presents. When she opened them, the toys came to life, then she played with them and they had fun.


The End"


Teacher's comment
"Well done. Try not to rub out so much (put a little cross by your mistakes.) 1RT"