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Sunday 17 July 2011

We looked and wrote down facts about the 'Titanic' and we had to write diary of a day as if we were on the Titanic.



Thursday 19th October


A day on the Titanic

1 Day
Dear Diary,
In the night when I was sleeping the boat was rocking left and right. But my stomach was hurting me, so I came out of my bed and I went upstairs then I felt sick in the sea then my belly stopped hurting and I went back to bed.
The next morning I went to the bathroom.
I went back in my room. Then I looked around the ship.
My belly was rumbling so I went downstairs in the little kitchen. I had tea and crackers with jam on, then I went back to my room and watched TV.
When I finished my breakfast, I turned off my TV and I went upstairs. I brought my swimming bag and I said that I'm going swimming to my Mom but she wanted to come too so she came.
We had our swimming costume on and we went in the swimming pool, it was fun.
We got out of the swimming pool and got our towels and we went back in our room.
I put on my clothes and went outside to look at the sea, It was a great view, the clothes that I was wearing was wonderful. The clothes that I wore was a dress with shorts underneath and I had jewels on.
Then I saw my friends.
We played together everyday in the night.
We was invited to a dinner party in the big dinner hall.


Then a disaster happened. The Titanic crashed into a iceberg.
Then everybody got on the boats, but the Titanic broke in half and everybody got off safely.
End

Teacher Comment:
"I'm glad you survived. A lovely diary account. 2RT"

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